Hi Zarem,
In reading your application, I notices that, while you answered the questions, you didn't really manage to give us a feel of you, or your character, however I would be interested in getting to know you on a more, "personal" basis, so if you possibly whisper me in-game for a chat when I'm online!
I would suggest perhaps adding a section as to why Zed would want to join the cult, a highly xenophobic religious organization that frowns upon anything not purely shadow .. with a few notable exceptions (Solanna :p )
Other than that, I hope you get the chance to contact one of the officers after your application is added to and re-reviewed.
Yours in the Shadow,
Ravenie