application from a priest

OOC:
Character name: Ziknor
Class: Priest

Why do you want to join the guild?: becose the forsaken is the best!
How did you learn of the cult?: seen them on events / roleplayed with them from other guilds

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IC:

hi there , im a priest named Ziknor
i had everything when i lived a practice abourd a ship,
constant clients but when they started to "disapear i was blamed and hanged for it
now what i heard you are serving the dark lady and i wuld want to offer my services aswell!

Hey there! Thanks for applying for our membership!

I'm afraid I cannot let you pass however. Your application is quite short and has a bit too many spelling errors for my liking. We like our members to spend some effort before joining as it lets us see their dedication - and get to know them better.

If you still want in, I ask you to be patient and write a li'l bit more. Spelling doesn't matter that much, but we want so see you spend some time on the story. Feel free to use these tips, if you don't know what to write:
- Where did the clients disappear? Or was it a total mystery?
- How was Ziknor resurrected into unlife? What was his first reaction?
- What are his views on the Shadow? What made him convert?
- What are his goals in unlife? How does he wish the Cult to help him with them?

By just answering a couple of those should give you enough length to get a pass. Let your imagination roam, and show us your best.

P.S. There's no need to make a new thread, you can post the new application here.

hi there , im a priest named Ziknor
i had everything when i lived a practice abord a ship,
constant clients but when they started to "disapear i was blamed and hanged for it
the disapearence of clients actually was me i merely wanted to know what the bodys culd withstand
first when i was resurected as an undead i was confused and lost until i found the apothecary
assuming they were diong the same as i did i started and intrest to join
now what i heard you are serving the dark lady and i wuld want to offer my services aswell!

hi there , im a priest named Ziknor
i had everything when i lived a practice abord a ship,
constant clients but when they started to "disapear i was blamed and hanged for it
the disapearence of clients actually was me i merely wanted to know what the bodys
culd withstand, and more importantly there after eat them the lack of food on the
sea had gotten me intrested for cannibalism.
first when i was resurected as an undead i was confused and lost
but i started to realice that this is not so bad im infact are stronger than before
assuming they were diong the same as i did i started and intrest to join
now what i heard you are serving the dark lady and i wuld want to offer my services aswell!

Hmm.. Well, I've read this now and I must agree with Thenkar. I suggest you also read up on the lore about the forsaken. When you have done so, write a new application if you are still interested.

/Dailor