Zandadane guild app

why i want to join i want to join this guild to- help in our fight agaisnt the undead scoruge

IC - Zanadane used to be a noble human warrior. During the third war he was sent to fight hordes of undead but was killed and raised to undeath. When the frozen throne was damged and lich kings control over Zandadane was weaked. He regained his free will and now is forsaken. He fights the undead Scrouge out to get his revenge.

Your IC part has too little stuff in it for my tastes. You've mostly told the tale of every Forsaken, so it's impossible for me to grasp a feeling of your character. I don't require anything grand, but a paragraph or two that reveal something about your character would be lovely. Something that makes him tick. If a story is not your strong point, an IC letter adressed to the Cult would be great too.
(This is a bit like splitting hairs, but you also missed the "Where did you learn about the Cult?" question.)

If you manage to do the things I ask, I'll say you pass. So get those creative nerves working!

Thenkar wrote:

Your IC part has too little stuff in it for my tastes. You've mostly told the tale of every Forsaken, so it's impossible for me to grasp a feeling of your character. I don't require anything grand, but a paragraph or two that reveal something about your character would be lovely. Something that makes him tick. If a story is not your strong point, an IC letter adressed to the Cult would be great too.
(This is a bit like splitting hairs, but you also missed the "Where did you learn about the Cult?" question.)

If you manage to do the things I ask, I'll say you pass. So get those creative nerves working!

^
Indeed, even a small IC letter to the cult will do it!