Joining

The icy winds of Northrend granted me strenght for my cause. I am a Frost Lich who seeks to aid the The Forgotten Shadow.

I would be happy to serve your cause to succeed.

Your application is a bit on the short side. I suggest you to read the application formula (https://thecult.forumotion.net/character-applications-f2/application-formula-read-before-applying-t21.htm) and try again.

I will write a more complex biography this time

The chill of death...

That's what defines me. I am a mage. An arcanist, who seeks immense knowledge, and starving for power...

My name was something else, sounding like a human thing. Now I use the name "Khalinan" I have no surname; I lost it long time ago; even if I remember it, I won't use it now, as carrying a human title is an alien thing.

My "living" life is so distant, that I only remember pictures on my mind.

I see a shiny citadel with magic and other wonders : Dalaran. That's where I lived, once...

And another memory; this one is too blurry yet I remember it : A powerful human kingdom; guarded by Light worshippers. "Lordearon". Maybe I lived there too...? As a mage perhaps. Or an advisor.

Then I see something else. This one is more familiar to me. Death, cries, hopelessness... etc. : "The Plague".

Then the memory suddenly fades away...

I woke up in a grave... My body was covered with dust and ashes. I was dead...

And a feeling came to me as I try get used to my "unlife". A power running in my empty veins. A darkened energy, which gives me great power : "The Shadow"...

I realised I could still use the Magi, my mind was cleared, and I was more powerful then ever.

I had finally broken free of all the illusions.

This is better, I especially like the last line.
You still missed the OOC part (questions about where'd you find out about us and why do you want to join), but I'm willing to let it slide...

... in case another officer seconds me, that is.
When/if someone supports me, you can contact one of us for your interview.

Thenkar wrote:

This is better, I especially like the last line.
You still missed the OOC part (questions about where'd you find out about us and why do you want to join), but I'm willing to let it slide...

... in case another officer seconds me, that is.
When/if someone supports me, you can contact one of us for your interview.

I support, indeed missed the OOC part, but IC part is fine (which is somewhat more important in my eyes.)

Well, the OOC part is quite simple. I looked for a Forsaken RP guild and asked a few people around the Trade. Then I heard the name The Cult of Shadow. It looked like a real RP guild to me, for it involves in The Forgotten Shadow deity. So here I am.