Thank you for writing an application to the Cult of Shadow.
First of all I would like to guess/assume that English is not your first language (Which is fine).
Secondly, if that is the case then the auto-correcter of words should be of quite a lot of help. Clear wording and grammar is often appreciated by a large variety of role-players, no matter what their taste be.
Thirdly, many people apply unsure of what to write or what to put in, well that's fine! You may be unsure, so in my view, be inspired by another persons application.
Here's a good and compact one I thought you might be inspired by :
https://thecult.forumotion.net/t731-baelwyn-shadebearer-applicationI'd like if you made a few edits and put more time into your application, remember, this is your first impression on everybody else within the guild. I'l be looking for forward if you decide to do so. If not, thank you for applying.
Morthimus out.